Comments on: NaPoWriMo #9: Paradise

By: Crafty green poet

Crafty green poet — Sun, 12 Apr 2009 11:12:14 +0000

this is lovely!

By: Anthony North

Anthony North — Fri, 10 Apr 2009 10:15:27 +0000

A lovely way of putting it.

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By: Pam

Pam — Fri, 10 Apr 2009 03:19:20 +0000

So simple and so powerful– Wow!

By: one more believer

one more believer — Fri, 10 Apr 2009 00:56:22 +0000

…only few know and experience paradise such as this… this stranger, his eyes must have seen what your husband knows…[i wonder does he know that he knows]…. beyond words that fit the feelin…

By: Liz at Yips and Howls

Liz at Yips and Howls — Fri, 10 Apr 2009 00:47:15 +0000

So simple, yet so profound and moving. “Sit beside your paradise”: that will stick with me.

By: jimmmaaa

jimmmaaa — Thu, 09 Apr 2009 18:53:19 +0000

This is wonderful. Seems like a language thing that makes a beautiful image for marriage. Wonderful poem.

By: Gavin

Gavin — Thu, 09 Apr 2009 16:52:46 +0000

This one took my breath away.

By: Jessica GC

Jessica GC — Thu, 09 Apr 2009 15:35:08 +0000

“…sit beside your paradise”
I love that part!