Comments on: NaPoWriMo #30: leave a line, take a line http://haystravelogue.com/poetry/2009/04/napowrimo-30-leave-a-line-take-a-line Wed, 08 Sep 2010 16:13:04 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Liz at Yips and Howls http://haystravelogue.com/poetry/2009/04/napowrimo-30-leave-a-line-take-a-line/comment-page-1#comment-456 Liz at Yips and Howls Tue, 05 May 2009 16:35:02 +0000 http://haystravelogue.com/?p=484#comment-456 Hope you're doing well after the April poetry madness. I stopped by to pass on a Kreativ Blogger Award. Others awarded it to me with the charge to pass it onto others. Visit the link below for details. Thanks again for sharing your poetry and supporting my work during April. <a href="http://blog.elizabethenslin.com/2009/05/kreativ-blogger-award" rel="nofollow">Kreativ Blogger Award</a> Hope you’re doing well after the April poetry madness. I stopped by to pass on a Kreativ Blogger Award. Others awarded it to me with the charge to pass it onto others. Visit the link below for details. Thanks again for sharing your poetry and supporting my work during April.

Kreativ Blogger Award

]]> By: BSQUARED86 http://haystravelogue.com/poetry/2009/04/napowrimo-30-leave-a-line-take-a-line/comment-page-1#comment-454 BSQUARED86 Fri, 01 May 2009 14:04:34 +0000 http://haystravelogue.com/?p=484#comment-454 This was one of my favorite lines! Everyone used the "feathers" differently and each poem came out fabulously! The structure really plays well with the overall feel of the poem (the drifting). The last line is my favorite. Thank yo for sharing with us this month! I look forward to reading more of your work! This was one of my favorite lines! Everyone used the “feathers” differently and each poem came out fabulously!

The structure really plays well with the overall feel of the poem (the drifting). The last line is my favorite.

Thank yo for sharing with us this month! I look forward to reading more of your work!

]]> By: Liz at Yips and Howls http://haystravelogue.com/poetry/2009/04/napowrimo-30-leave-a-line-take-a-line/comment-page-1#comment-453 Liz at Yips and Howls Fri, 01 May 2009 01:47:43 +0000 http://haystravelogue.com/?p=484#comment-453 Simple, lovely image. I especially like the end: "words searching for a poem" and how the form is also a kind of riff on that. I have enjoyed the unique voice you develop in your poems and also the insights you bring from Turkish culture. Simple, lovely image. I especially like the end: “words searching for a poem” and how the form is also a kind of riff on that. I have enjoyed the unique voice you develop in your poems and also the insights you bring from Turkish culture.

]]> By: Mom http://haystravelogue.com/poetry/2009/04/napowrimo-30-leave-a-line-take-a-line/comment-page-1#comment-452 Mom Thu, 30 Apr 2009 23:56:05 +0000 http://haystravelogue.com/?p=484#comment-452 I'm going to miss this -- it has been like opening a new present every day. Thank you. I’m going to miss this — it has been like opening a new present every day. Thank you.

]]> By: Mom http://haystravelogue.com/poetry/2009/04/napowrimo-30-leave-a-line-take-a-line/comment-page-1#comment-451 Mom Thu, 30 Apr 2009 23:55:20 +0000 http://haystravelogue.com/?p=484#comment-451 What great imagery! And the lyric is like concrete poetry in that its appearance on the page looks like an opening palm. I like it a lot. What great imagery! And the lyric is like concrete poetry in that its appearance on the page looks like an opening palm. I like it a lot.

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